Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Even panhandlers need copy editors

As an attorney who drafts numerous intricate legal documents, I pay close attention to word choices and usage.

And now, with the President's stimulus package getting so much attention, the New York Times looked at how even the signs that city panhandlers hold can reflect the current state of the economy. In place of a sign simply stating, "Homeless. Please help." the writer prepared new signs saying, "Please Support Pres. Obama’s Stimulus Plan, and begin right here … at the bottom … Thank you."

Shortly after the new signs were unveiled, it was too soon to determine the full effectiveness of the new wording, but at least a couple panhandlers had received more contributions.

(Photo by Brennan Cavanaugh.)

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